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So I finally manage to comment on one of your drawing! You ask for some advice so I'll try to help you as much as I can
First of all, your proportions are actually quite good, except the head is a bit small ;D However, he appears to be extremely skinny, especially his torso. I don't know whether you want him to be muscly but you could still give him some more ... form (as in making his shoulders and chest broader and enhancing his hips - not as much as for women, of course, but men have them, too, after all ;D)
His right knee seems to have slid down a bit haha and his feet are too pointy
As for his wings ... I suppose they're feathered? So draw some feathers! Depending on your style you don't even have to draw every single one but you could at least hint at them :3 Just take a look at photos of birds to see how wings are built (because they consist of several different types of feathers). There some really helpful tutorials on dA, too
I hope I could help out a bit Just keep practising, you'll see improvement in no time!
First of all, your proportions are actually quite good, except the head is a bit small ;D However, he appears to be extremely skinny, especially his torso. I don't know whether you want him to be muscly but you could still give him some more ... form (as in making his shoulders and chest broader and enhancing his hips - not as much as for women, of course, but men have them, too, after all ;D)
His right knee seems to have slid down a bit haha and his feet are too pointy
As for his wings ... I suppose they're feathered? So draw some feathers! Depending on your style you don't even have to draw every single one but you could at least hint at them :3 Just take a look at photos of birds to see how wings are built (because they consist of several different types of feathers). There some really helpful tutorials on dA, too
I hope I could help out a bit Just keep practising, you'll see improvement in no time!